Joseph asks…
story name for quizilla story?
im writing a story for quizilla(.com) and i dont have a name for it
its about a girl going to camp and meeting a jerky boy that wont leave her alone (but at the end she falls inlove with him ^.^) so if anyone has a name or ideas pleasseeee answer!!! =]
Martin answers:
I have a few ideas; some tacky some a little less… 
A Summer To Remember
Summer Freak
Summer Jerk
Boy, Girl, and Summer
Happy Campers
Summer Love
Lover Boy
… U get the idea… I personally prefer those than the Camp Rock, Its too wannabeish with the movie Camp Rock…
Maria asks…
What do you think of Ch. 1 of my story?
Ch. 1: The Horrors of POW camp
http://quizilla.teennick.com/stories/16518123/escape-from-the-rising-sun-ch-1-the-horrors-of-pow-camp
tell me what u think of it
Martin answers:
Its really good. But here are a couple minor things to change.
“If Jimmy had one word to describe the camp, it would be “hell”.” (i dont know about this line. Maybe try to re write it?)
“24/7in case” (no space inbetween 24/7 and in)
“person andalways had a sense of hope.” (NO space inbetween and and always)
“a Japanese soldier approachedStanley,grabbedhim, and dragged him to a clear area.” (no space inbetween approached and Stanly & Grabbed and him.)
“We escape tonight.” (maybe change this line to just “Tonight.”.)
William asks…
Help with book title? Thank you 
?
I am writing a book on quizilla
Story Plot:
5 girls go camping on friday the thirteenth. All are very pretty. The girl hosting the party used to have a friend named Alicia and she was very ugly and kind of obese (I hope this offends no one. Obese people are usually pretty, not in a wierd way) So in the middle of the night, one by one, each girl is killed until the friend of Alicia’s. I hope this will become a series, but on quizilla of course.
Thank you in advance! ))))) ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Yah, I was planning for a cliched story with an unnusual twist, like a friend. Thank you everyone Post more if you’d like
Martin answers:
Friday (that very word holds fear for many people since Rebbecca Black first uttered it)
I’ll post more as I think of them.
-One by One
-Camp Murder(or a synonym?)
-Camp Tragic
-You could try for alliteration with “Massacre at Camp (insert camp name beginning with an M)”
PS can you help with my question?
Http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=ArILr7KDwzDIjiv7hx6uokPty6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20110608151817AAa6m3U
Donna asks…
Teens: Can you read/rate my story?
HEre it is:
http://www.quizilla.com/stories/11006861/summer-camp-romance
Just read it/ rate it etc etc. I would appreciate it if you would rate it on there, but you can here too.
thanks:)
It’s not finished yet! Its just the first chapter.
5th answerer: I’ve never heard of Jacwueline Wilson.
Martin answers:
I wouldnt read it becuase its about a girl but its seems pretty good but it needs to be stronger in some places
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